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For you Alone

Author: darkwiccan14
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-sniffle-aww lol kinda demented but hey, it's all

For you Alone

Slit my throat,
Cut my wrist,
You hope I'll croak,
Sitting there laughing and watching me like this.

Why are you laughing,
Why am I doing this,
These are the questions,
among the abyss.

Your laughing because you love to see me hurt,
I'm doing this to have blood on my shirt,
And plus this is one of your suggestions,
I'm doing this for you,
And for you alone,
I need to do this so that i know i'll always have someone to call my own,
I'm doind this for you,
For you alone.

Submitted on 2007-02-14 19:51:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Too much angst in a 14 yr old!
| Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by einjun | [ Reply to This ]

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