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    dots Submission Name: dreamdots
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    Author: Sanjhana
    ASL Info:    21/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 118/154/45
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsdreamdots
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    the dream i had
    was of you.
    but in the dream
    you loved me.

    you loved me
    the way i love you.
    the way
    i should be loved.

    the dream i had
    was beautiful.
    but that dream
    was just that... a dream.




    Submitted on 2007-02-15 11:43:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice, i like this, but in the future you may wanna capitalize the title and your first words just so it stands out more. ^_^
    | Posted on 2007-02-15 00:00:00 | by Midnight Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      Sanghana

    We all have that dream
    But in reality its a dream showing us the way to happiness
    Follow that dream and you will find the real person you want and you will know him when he is for real

    By the way this is the first comment I have given personally

    I felt I should respond since you gave such thoughtful words on my poem

    KEEP THE SPIRIT

    Karen
    | Posted on 2007-02-15 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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