dream

Author: Sanjhana ASL Info:    21/f/India Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 118 /154 /45 Words: 46

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dream

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the dream i had was of you. but in the dream you loved me. you loved me the way i love you. the way i should be loved. the dream i had was beautiful. but that dream was just that... a dream.

Submitted on 2007-02-15 11:43:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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nice, i like this, but in the future you may wanna capitalize the title and your first words just so it stands out more. ^_^

| Posted on 2007-02-15 00:00:00 | by Midnight Rain | [ Reply to This ]

Sanghana We all have that dream But in reality its a dream showing us the way to happiness Follow that dream and you will find the real person you want and you will know him when he is for real By the way this is the first comment I have given personally I felt I should respond since you gave such thoughtful words on my poem KEEP THE SPIRIT Karen

| Posted on 2007-02-15 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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