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    dots Submission Name: Dancing Melodydots
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    Author: PrincessDoom13
    ASL Info:    19/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 81/81/40
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 149
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 352



    Description:
       Ah, the wondrous sounds of people talking and talking when there's an awesome concert going on and others are trying to actually absorb it and enjoy it but they can't because of the talking...


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    dotsDancing Melodydots
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    The murmurs
    Of indistinct voices
    Obstruct the path
    Of the melodious guitar
    As it struggles
    To be heard
    Above everything.

    In and out
    The melody is found
    Dancing
    Meekly
    Calling everyone
    To recognize it.
    To
    Never
    Forget
    It.




    Submitted on 2007-02-15 16:53:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I laughed at your description.
    I went to a Death Cab concert with one of my extremely talkative friends and he was talking on his cell ALL THE WAY through 'i will follow you into the dark' and eventually i took his phone and hung it up for him.

    Ha.

    I agree whole-heartedly with your poem :]
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by wovenwords | [ Reply to This ]



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