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    dots Submission Name: Optimismdots
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    Author: PrincessDoom13
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 79/80/39
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 107
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 571



    Description:
       Just a poem from a somebody to a someone!


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    dotsOptimismdots
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    I try to be optimistic,
    Keeping the hope up
    When things turn bad and
    When all seems to go
    d
    o
    w
    n
    h
    i
    l
    l

    I am the one standing
    At the very top
    Urging you to come up
    For each day brings
    a new light.

    I just wonder
    When I tumble down
    Just who will be there?
    Will you be glad to
    pull


    me


    back




    Submitted on 2007-02-15 16:59:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it is a cool poem, though. i forgot to say that. i like it
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by Myopic | [ Reply to This ]
      just dont fly, you know,
    too close to the sun or anything.
    they're both pretty equal and opposite. there's some real wisdom in both of them, but the wisdom in application with people, is to know both sides and use them interchangebly with the situation. i guess what im saying is, if you get pulled back, dont get get pulled back so far that your sinking exactly the way you were, before.
    you know?
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by Myopic | [ Reply to This ]
      You know I'd pull you back up. I know. I'm just that amazing. Lol. No, I'm kidding. But seriously, I'd pull you back up. But when the time comes, hopefully "what's-his-face" will be there to pull you back up.
    | Posted on 2007-02-17 00:00:00 | by nameless child | [ Reply to This ]



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