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    dots Submission Name: In flightdots
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    Author: mabs
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    dotsIn flightdots
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    Into the skies
    i'll fly sleepily
    awaking early
    in the morning
    hoping for the contrails
    to wisk me out of sight early on

    i'll travel into
    sight of the clouds
    and watch the sun creep
    up over me
    and i'll watch the rhythem
    of the humdrum sound
    around me and hope
    this time I fly in flight.




    Submitted on 2007-02-15 19:40:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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