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You say that you want her You say that you love her But you never show it You left her hurting Left her with bruises Left her with cuts When she refuses You and your drama You went to everyone Including her mama Trying to make it seem As if she was the problem Everybody knew you were the problem You say you want to fix it You want her back home Told everybody that you were in the wrong Now she's back home Every thing is good You're doing all the things that you should The days go by Things start to change You go out come in and you're starting with your games Starts with an argument You're going back and forth She goes into the room Lye on the bed You come in and grab her by the head You're steady beating her She is screaming Knowing that she has a child Inside of the house The child comes out Screaming and crying Run to her neighbors Because she doesnt know any better She turns back around And told you to stop Leave her mother alone You told her to shut up and knocked her to the floor The mother gets angry Mored than ever She finally fights back By the time you realized it She was out of your life But you come by She is not hearing it That is your lost Because you should have realized what you had was good And she's better off without you! |
Ouch! a real downer, but that is how life is sometimes ... the first 25 or so lines of this poem had a great cadence to it, really ... if you ended the poem at the line "Thing start to change" you would have an excellent short poem --in my humble opinion-- however, over all it is a fine poem ... bravo ... bravo ...| Posted on 2007-02-15 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ] | |