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Fear Balade


Author: Porcelaine
ASL Info:    27/F/Croatia
Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 880 /703 /256
Words: 156
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
Total Views: 1210
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 989



Description:


I have nothing to say for myself. It's playful, it's disturbing, it's sick. Quite like me someone might suggest.


Fear Balade



Tempt me, rake me, ill forsake me
Blossoms in your lovely mind
Shake me, make me make you bleed
When awake a scream you find
Gasp and vanish, run to me
Poisoned, hungry, feed on me
Cold and wet, break in a sweat
I am always there for you, I smile

Twist and turn and make me me burn
Lovely how a panic writhes
Nesting in between your lies
Lady darkness might be blind
Chase you chase me, find a door
Trick you trick me, run some more
Open wide and hold your grip
Ready, don't forget to trip

Nasty, evil, naughty monster
Darling would you pet the beast
Better yet before it's feast
Happy thoughts won't help at all
Leave no time to take your doll
Playtime over, grab a breath
Won't you meet with Lady Death
Come on now, don't you be shy

Fear has been too kind on you




Submitted on 2007-02-16 01:21:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Mind motives 8->... The psychotic dilemma of an emotional tornmented mind... The "crazy dark creature" watching from the deep and frozen corners of your spirit... That brings back memories... these "obsession vibes" :)

What will it be? Angel or Demon?
| Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by Non-Sens-Uality | [ Reply to This ]
  Its been far to long away from this site. I miss the talent! Your poem brings chill to my skin, your word will bring nightmares!(smile) I love this write and you are so talented!!! Thanks for sharring.
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  Potent stuff and very finely done with some excellent rhyme and meter...a tad different than your usualy fare, however, it is still you, the silken, sly, sultry sorceress of words....bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
| Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  Well, then... Hard to say what kind of opinion I have on this one; it is disturbing, flirtatious, painful, and slightly demonic all at once. How do I comment on something that doesn't want to sit still long enough to allow an opinion to coalesce...?

Sunday...Why did it have to be Sunday? I'm still thawing from that snowdrift I fell into (I thought it was a hill.). Anyhow.

--crimson echo
| Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
  i loved this, i thought the rhyming and flow were great, very fast paced and exciting, i had visions of a wild eyed girl, chanting taunting and teasin gher lover victim. different from your other writings, veryenjoyable
gerry
| Posted on 2007-02-16 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, this verse reads like "frolicking with death as a playmate"! This verse has your characteristic brialliance with form, and is breathtaking in it's action and subject! Awesome, as always, dear Porcelaine!
| Posted on 2007-02-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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