My Wish -------------------------------------------
I see you everyday.
You're so close
But so far away.
If I could wish apon a star
I would wish you weren't so far.
I want to be the one you want
In your arms all day long
Hold me tight
All through the night.
I think about you all the time
Wishing & dreaming
You could be mine
My heart beats faster
When I see your face
My body shivers & it shakes
From your beauty & your grace
You look like an earth-bound god
I see you everyday
You're so close
But so far away
If I could wish apon a star
I would wish you weren't so far.
This is one of those poems written for the purpose of brightening a few hearts and making a few smiles. Not to go into depth about societies issues, but to show about how love and loss can be. You did that very well.
Thanks for sharing this lighthearted piece.
Aw, that's a sweet little poem, and sad at the same time. Nice emotion in there, and while your word choices are a little cliché, I think it turned out really well, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Overall, I think it's great :)
Submission Name: My Wish
