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    dots Submission Name: Conflicteddots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 230/384/131
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I can't stand (not) being around you.


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    dotsConflicteddots
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    It is so comfortable, sometimes
    To be alone (with you),
    To (not) be completely by myself.
    I find myself wishing
    That these times
    Would last forever.




    Submitted on 2007-02-16 14:49:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Conflicted.
    Appropriate title for this work. The two sides of the coin
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      Very contradicting write. Whether the reader chooses to read the words in brackets determines the overall meaning of the poem. Whether it's about love or hate.
    But there is a fine line between the two after all.
    A clever and unique write. Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by SilverScent | [ Reply to This ]


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