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    dots Submission Name: Everyday I Can't Erasedots
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    Author: always_confused
    ASL Info:    16/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 4/9/21
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsEveryday I Can't Erasedots
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    Wake up in the morning,
    remember all you did wrong.
    Wish you could take it back,
    but know your chance has come and gone.
    Try no to regret,
    forget it and pass it by.
    Live with what you have,
    knowiwng you could've had more.
    Show nothing but smiles
    when he goes by.
    Convience him you're o.k.,
    convience yourself you're even better.
    When you're reminded of the feelings,
    keep your mouth shut,
    it doesn't matter.
    Continue on you way
    as if its all just fine.
    Hid the things you long to express,
    forget they're close by.
    Nod your head and keep on walking,
    leave the truth behind.
    Go home,
    crawl back into bed,
    fall asleep,
    and repeat all over again.




    Submitted on 2007-02-16 14:54:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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