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    Author: Dragonfish91
    ASL Info:    16/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 3/6/8
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 211
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1130



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       lol. I don't really know where this one was going...kind of just my routine spontaneous writings for practice. yeahhh, it rhymes...I didn't really plan on that happening though. xD


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    It feels like there's nothing left to say,
    Nowhere to go, nowhere to stay.
    So many questions, so little time
    Why can't you just give me a sign?

    Wasting all that time wondering in bed
    All there's left are the thoughts in my head
    About how no matter how hard I try
    Why does it seem like nothing but lies?

    It feels like there's nothing left to say,
    Nowhere to go, nowhere to stay.
    So many questions, so little time
    Why can't you just give me a sign?

    We can't tell where the road goes from here
    Where's that door that will end my fear?
    No more never-mended hearts
    Leave behind those broken thoughts

    Maybe the right path will solve it all
    But until then, we can only stall
    Through the jungle we shall go
    What the future holds isn't ours is to know

    Take my hand, lock it to yours
    Hide the key and shut these doors
    Hold on tight and clear my mind
    So I can finally say that I'm actually fine.




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