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    dots Submission Name: Fuck Medots
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    Author: poetry chica
    ASL Info:    17/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 93/98/34
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 762
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 377



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    dotsFuck Medots
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    fuck me gently
    fuck me hard
    just act like you care
    kiss my lips
    bite my neck
    run your fingers through my hair
    hold my close
    lay me down gently
    tell me you love me
    say it like you mean it
    forget me tommorrow
    i'm just a slut
    a slut for love
    just love me
    that's all i ask




    Submitted on 2007-02-17 12:36:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ehh, it's sad.
    I wish people that 'hate' sluts could read this.
    But still don't you know you won't get love by [censored] everyone.
    It was good though.
    I understood what you were saying.
    | Posted on 2007-09-09 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
      ah. interesting.
    the desperation for love that is represented in your writing is vivid, and it makes the write good.
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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