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Fuck Me

Author: poetry chica
ASL Info:    17/f/usa
Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 93 /98 /34
Words: 60
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 968
Average Vote:    3.0000
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Fuck Me

fuck me gently
fuck me hard
just act like you care
kiss my lips
bite my neck
run your fingers through my hair
hold my close
lay me down gently
tell me you love me
say it like you mean it
forget me tommorrow
i'm just a slut
a slut for love
just love me
that's all i ask

Submitted on 2007-02-17 12:36:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ehh, it's sad.
I wish people that 'hate' sluts could read this.
But still don't you know you won't get love by [censored] everyone.
It was good though.
I understood what you were saying.
| Posted on 2007-09-09 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
  ah. interesting.
the desperation for love that is represented in your writing is vivid, and it makes the write good.
| Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]

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