Hey ur back!!! I liked this, though it could have been longer it was still really good. I think that u created an accurate image of what it would be like. Hope u keep it up on here. Luv Ya.
It's intersting. But I thought it was a bit too short... I'd like to have seen more of the story, some emotions and more imagery in there, but it's nice just the same. :)
Submission Name: A Tale of Janbi Run Bridge
