Description: My grandmother and grandfather shared a love which i've never seen . . . but i've heard stories of. and i've always kept those stories in the back of my mind. When Love is hard, when you doubt, i've always had that idea. so i wanted to try to share it.
You'll find it, I Swear. -------------------------------------------
Know it痴 there.
You値l find it
I swear
And when you do
You値l wonder how
You lived on only air
Until now.
So cry just now, there there
Sometimes we all must
But remember somewhere
There痴 someone you値l trust
Who値l roll over to kiss you
And smile each sunrise. . .
Nightly he値l miss you
when he closes his eyes.
Know it痴 there.
You値l find it
I swear
And when you do
You値l wonder how
You lived on just air
Until now.
Moot,
It is late, so I wil be brief. This is a wonderful little image.
We will both keep looking, and someday, someday. . . the search will be over. What a day that will be.
I am sorry I didnt read this sooner. You are a great poet my friend, but surely you know that by now. I'll stop my blabering.
Good luck on your race this weekend. I will be thinking of you.
-Dm00t
Gosh I hope so!! I think this is what we all yearn for...someone to love....and someone to love us back. Ya know after we find love once, and it ends, it's so hard to believe that it will come again and that it will last, but this write just gave me some hope..and I thank you for that. I think we all just need to tell ourselves that somebody out there is meant to love us and we all deserve that. I liked the repeating of the first and last stanzas...it just really hit home the point that we will find the love we're looking for...someday. Thanks for this. ~hailie~
It is a human longing that all of us share, to be loved and to give love. I think that trust is the key principle that nurtures love. You mention that nicely in this piece.
It's nice to know that this write was inspired based on the endearing love of two people that have lived on through the ages and their example has been passed on to those that have followed.
I like the simplicity and even the repeating of the first and last verse. It works.
Submission Name: You'll find it, I Swear.
