"My worst enemy lays beside me
my best friend too
gazing at the clouds"
my favorite words, i guess what you want to tell is that you are close to them. But in yourth people fught too much i guess, so i think you wrote it because you want to show us that we have to be very close and helping each other. so a good write!
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peace and love
this is a good poem, but i dont see how you could be at peace with your worst enemy. Maybe your x- worst enemy. But since i dont see how you can make x-worst enemy fit into a poem properly, you did better than i could have. good work. Could you PM me and tell me how it relates to youth though???? I really want to understand. Thanks.