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Submission Name: Snow dots

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Author:	jennah
ASL Info:	19/F/IL
Elite Ratio:	4.07 - 101/73/22
Words:	38

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	1267
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	310

Description:
I wrote this one...last winter I think, but I really liked it and it seemed fitting considering we now have over 18 inches on the ground. I've tried to write more snow poems, but I kept coming back to this one.

Snow

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Crystalline beauty,
dazzling bright,
painting the world
a portrait of white.

Sent from above,
out of the sky,
comes unannounced
soft as a sigh.

Merciful beauty
covering all,
nothing but absence
and still it will fall.

Submitted on 2007-02-18 20:08:57 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very descriptive yet short--well done! The only thing I'd change is above to Above--but mayb that's not what you meant ; )
| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
  Jenna this is one of my favorite poems you've written and if i'm not mistaken but its older than that cuz i published it in the school paper Junior year. Luv ya

Sarah
| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by Selene | [ Reply to This ]
  very nice! quality instead of quantity in the amount of words used, very good job and good imagery!

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| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
  hey hi this is a beautiful pic for yor site
i also like the picture you painted in words very nice

sandman
| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  Pretty, descriptive words. Paints a picture of a night near a lake where the ground is covered with snow. So simple yet, beautiful.
| Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by Foreseer | [ Reply to This ]

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