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Don't Leave Me


Author: Midnight Rain
ASL Info:    15/M/Connecticut
Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 18 /16 /5
Words: 115
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Don't Leave Me



Please don't leave me alone
Time would cease to exist

Wherever you go

Whatever you do

My heart belongs to you

Even if you don't feel the same
I don't think I can change

You will be mine always
Even if you never were

So please don't let me go
I know that I never will

Wherever you go

Whatever you do

My heart belongs to you






Submitted on 2007-02-18 21:49:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is another beautiful caring write from you
I feel this same way about Family
To me Family means everything to me
I would be so lost without my Mom
She has given up practically everything to make sre her 3 children have the best of Life
My little sister has Downs syndrome and my Mother has stopped at nothing to make sure she hasd the beautiful life that was destined for her
This woman is my Hero and I would do anything to Help her move forward in life
Excellent Job
I can definately feel the emotion and caring heart you have hidden behind your words
God Bless
Ron

And Thank You for your recent comment
I really do appreciate it
Dont put yourself down though my Friend
I believe Poetry is an expression of ones emotion and their Heart
You got that down pat already
PLEASE KEEP WRITING AS IT HELPS HEAL
God Bless
Ron
| Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  I think i may fall in love with you if you keep these kind of poems up. :) lol.
<3 Julia
| Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
  i think this one has to be the best
| Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]
  aww that's so sweet. did you right it for someone special or just to make all the girls melt?

wonderful
| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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