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    dots Submission Name: Don't Leave Medots
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    Author: Midnight Rain
    ASL Info:    15/M/Connecticut
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 18/16/5
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsDon't Leave Medots
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    Please don't leave me alone
    Time would cease to exist

    Wherever you go

    Whatever you do

    My heart belongs to you

    Even if you don't feel the same
    I don't think I can change

    You will be mine always
    Even if you never were

    So please don't let me go
    I know that I never will

    Wherever you go

    Whatever you do

    My heart belongs to you






    Submitted on 2007-02-18 21:49:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is another beautiful caring write from you
    I feel this same way about Family
    To me Family means everything to me
    I would be so lost without my Mom
    She has given up practically everything to make sre her 3 children have the best of Life
    My little sister has Downs syndrome and my Mother has stopped at nothing to make sure she hasd the beautiful life that was destined for her
    This woman is my Hero and I would do anything to Help her move forward in life
    Excellent Job
    I can definately feel the emotion and caring heart you have hidden behind your words
    God Bless
    Ron

    And Thank You for your recent comment
    I really do appreciate it
    Dont put yourself down though my Friend
    I believe Poetry is an expression of ones emotion and their Heart
    You got that down pat already
    PLEASE KEEP WRITING AS IT HELPS HEAL
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I think i may fall in love with you if you keep these kind of poems up. :) lol.
    <3 Julia
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
      i think this one has to be the best
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]
      aww that's so sweet. did you right it for someone special or just to make all the girls melt?

    wonderful
    | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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