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    dots Submission Name: My Friend is Lostdots
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    Author: Roula
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46/64/45
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Friend is Lostdots
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    Oh my friend,
    She got lost, all alone-
    I know she's out there.

    If you see her, can you get her attention?
    Tell her I miss her,
    and that shes on my mind.

    I certainly hope that she is happy
    I still feel the same;
    but I know its hopless.

    Everyone says that she will find me.
    "Maybe she got delayed on the road?"
    I know its not that way...

    I am eager to complain.
    How long must I wait?
    Can't she break my heart another day?




    Submitted on 2007-02-19 00:44:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i know how you feel. you just want to talk to your friend and talk to them. but they are nowhere to be found. and so you wait to talk to them, but
    in the
    meantime
    you
    die.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]


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