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Lies From A Photobooth


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
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Class/Type: Lyrics /Depressed
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Lies From A Photobooth



After all we've been through
I never expected something like this
I was always beside you
While you wallowed in self pity
When deep doewn inside you knew you were pretty
And you told me nothing was wrong
But sweetie, I'm no mind reader
How could you expect me to know?

You're the self portrait of a well planned lie
And all that time I held your hand
You were planning how to die

I should have seen it coming (But I didn't)
I should have known the truth (But I didn't)
I should have stopped this from happening (But I couldn't)
Lies from a photobooth

My hand was there, why did you never take it?
I'm a reasonable person hunny
Why couldn't you see that?
With one hand in the grave
I cry to a life I couldn't save
Unanswered questions, my spirit is restless
How could you expect me to know?

You're the self portrait of a well planned lie
And all that time I held your hand
You were planning how to die

I should have seen it coming (But I didn't)
I should have known the truth (But I didn't)
I should have stopped this from happening (But I couldn't)
Lies from a photobooth

It was coming, It was coming (But I didn't)
How could I see that coming (But I didn't)
Nothing was wrong, that's what you told me (But I didn't)
Nothing nothing nothing at all (But I didn't)
It's all I have left to hold (But I didn't)
Lies from a photobooth

I tried so hard (lies lies lies)
But I couldn't save you (lies lies lies)
I tried to save you (lies lies lies)
But I couldn't (lies lies lies)
I didn't (lies)
I didn't
I didn't (lies)
I didn't

Lies.....

From a photobooth




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  The concept is brilliant!
A touching piece, I should send this to a good friend of mine.
She did the same once upon a time, thankfully she didn’t succeed.
I wrote a similar piece for her titled “A Recollection For Shey”
When you have time check it out.

My condolences for your loss.
| Posted on 2007-05-16 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]
  i really like this piece. i am sorry for your loss if indeed this is from an actual experience. i lost someone i loved very much when i was 17, and her passing still hasnt gotten much easier. it is good that you can express your emotions in such a clear and precise way. the scheme was good, and i liked the repetition, it adds to the desparation and anger at the loss (to me anyways).
| Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by ryeker03 | [ Reply to This ]


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