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    dots Submission Name: The Girl Who.......dots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 663
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 292



    Description:
       This Poem Is Pretty Self Explanitory


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    dotsThe Girl Who.......dots
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    The Girl Who Seemed Unbreakable
    Broke
    The Girl Who Seemed So Strong
    Crumbled
    The Girl Who Alwaiiz Laughed It Off
    Cried
    The Girl Who Alwaiiz Spoke Truth
    Lied About It All
    The Girl Who Never Stopped Trying
    Finally Gave Up And Quit




    Submitted on 2007-02-19 09:47:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is pretty short, but good. you got you point across. i like the way you write. the only problem i have is all the typos in your writing. but it's cool...keep up the good work, and i'll keep reading.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      *I like it a lot... It reminds me of me when I thought that nothing could hurt me.. then i found out what love is and that all changed... great write...*
    love ya
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. It's so simple, yet has alot of meaning behind it. The only thing that really bothers me is when people spell incorrectly in poetry.
    | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by FarFromSanityy | [ Reply to This ]


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