Description: Just on emotionally heavy day.
Man I completely shutdown until nightfall.
Then I heard this song and it reminded me of my High School sweet heart. So I wrote a poem about that person.
That one moment -------------------------------------------
Sometimes it is difficult to tell what is real.
All I really know is "I love you" doesn't convey what I feel.
I can tell you why I love you without hesitating.
It's is time I stop fearing the truth.
In my heart there is no debating.
I feel lost when you are away. The solitude is blinding me.
Please come to me and light my way. I need your love to see.
I love you because you are what it feels to be right.
I need you because you are the color in my life.
I am still discovering to this day that you're so wonderful.
It's not enough just to say that you are so beautiful.
Tell me and please be honest if this feeling is mutual.
If you decide on me I promise this will be continual.
There are very few people who have been through what we've been through.
So here is the moment where we say forever starting from today if you say I love you.
Songs often take me back to a moment or person. This felt like it was written in the moment though. A good solid narrative on your feelings for her. I love when men write this type of poetry, because its a glimpse for me. Mine is not a word man, and cannot describe his feelings, so this is a peep for me, which I find intriguing. So thank you for sharing your heart.
I saw Ron comment here, and it makes me sad. I miss that guy and his daily does of optimism and pep, and prayers for people he had never met. He and magnicat were dear friends and this site is not the same without them.
This is a very well worded write with an incredible amount of emotion
One cant help but feel the Love you have for your soulmate
Thank You for fighting for the freedom of every living breathing human being
You are not just fighting for America
America has a Heart and cares for other people in other countries
You are showing that Heart for continually fighting for World Peace
GOD BLESS YOU
I will be Praying for you
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think