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    dots Submission Name: forgivenessdots
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    Author: black rose13
    ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137/97/39
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 574
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    Bytes: 650



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    dotsforgivenessdots
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    Saying sorry never really resolves anything that people do.
    It's still in the back of your mind.
    Wishing that this never happened,
    and you're wishing that you never had to say sorry.

    Everything you say to try to make it okay never works.
    And i'm tired of trying to be perfect.
    We can't be a picture perfect family.

    This isn't possible.
    I tell you the truth and you turn you rback on me.

    Everything you say to try to make it okay never works.
    I'm tired of trying to be perfect.
    We can't be a picture perfect family.




    Submitted on 2007-02-19 16:46:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      rah good heart. "nowhere kids" -smile empty soul. listen i think you'll like. i know were your coming from with this one and this is a

    "Everything you say to try to make it okay never works.
    I'm tired of trying to be perfect.
    We can't be a picture perfect family."


    so true so true

    spider spinners
    ~rach
    | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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