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Author: darkwiccan14
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ha ha now wut *person who i wont say name that goes here!* ! ha ha


They said it's just all in MY head,
At least that's what the shrink had said,
It might've been to help me,
But I think the mother fucker's on weed,
It's just the thing that I need.

They say it's just a phase,
I think that they need to join the craze,
And that shrink shouldn't get a raise.

They said I'm sleeze,
They said I get down on my knees,
But what the hell do they know,
To them I'm their life's show,
But what the hell do they know,
Its surely not me,
So dont make up stories about being on my knees,
Just cuz' they're a hoe,
Doesn't mean that i didn't tell and now,
Their mama knows...


Submitted on 2007-02-19 20:08:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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   That was good. Read easy and fast. Liked the attitude.
| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by SuperbNova | [ Reply to This ]

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