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Believe


Author: Midnight Rain
ASL Info:    15/M/Connecticut
Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 18 /16 /5
Words: 76
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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This is for all the depressed and lonely people out there who need some hope. ^_^


Believe



I know you're feeling down
You've lost your faith in life

And when the rain falls down
I'll be there for you

You better start to fight
To make your dreams come true



You don't have to worry
Dark clouds fade away

It's time to live your life
Don't cry for yesterday

And whatever you will do
Remember that I will believe in you






Submitted on 2007-02-19 20:50:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is beautiful
You show your true heart in this write
I too write with a lot of emotion and always try to get a positive word out
I would also like to Welcome you to Elite Skills
I hope this site brings as much joy to you as It has for me
God Bless
And Please keep writing the Positive themed writes
The World needs to know there are people out there who care!!!
God Bless
Ron

Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  This deffednetally gave me hope.
| Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]
  I kind of agree with SuperbNova however I believe everyone needs hope... especially when they are depressed. Good read.
| Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by RayneDownAsh | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked it, but I found it a little short and a little cliché. I liked the rhymes and the basic scheme of it.
| Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by SuperbNova | [ Reply to This ]


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