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    dots Submission Name: Believedots
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    Author: Midnight Rain
    ASL Info:    15/M/Connecticut
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 18/16/5
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 754
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    Description:
       This is for all the depressed and lonely people out there who need some hope. ^_^


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    dotsBelievedots
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    I know you're feeling down
    You've lost your faith in life

    And when the rain falls down
    I'll be there for you

    You better start to fight
    To make your dreams come true



    You don't have to worry
    Dark clouds fade away

    It's time to live your life
    Don't cry for yesterday

    And whatever you will do
    Remember that I will believe in you






    Submitted on 2007-02-19 20:50:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is beautiful
    You show your true heart in this write
    I too write with a lot of emotion and always try to get a positive word out
    I would also like to Welcome you to Elite Skills
    I hope this site brings as much joy to you as It has for me
    God Bless
    And Please keep writing the Positive themed writes
    The World needs to know there are people out there who care!!!
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This deffednetally gave me hope.
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]
      I kind of agree with SuperbNova however I believe everyone needs hope... especially when they are depressed. Good read.
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by RayneDownAsh | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it, but I found it a little short and a little cliché. I liked the rhymes and the basic scheme of it.
    | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by SuperbNova | [ Reply to This ]


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