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    dots Submission Name: Nolandots
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    Author: DontxSurrender
    ASL Info:    15/f/US
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 31/51/26
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 934
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 694



    Description:
       This is a poem I wrote for my [now ex]boyfriend on Valentines Day of 2007. It may not be the best thing you've ever read, but when he read it, tears came to his eyes. It doesn't mean all that much to me, but it is still one of the best gifts I've ever created.


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    dotsNolandots
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    With the absence of love
    comes the absence of light
    and bitter cold sets in
    nipping the noses and toes
    of those who lose their way

    But with the presence of love
    light, color shines through
    cascading forward and
    filling the frostbitten hearts
    with a long-lost warmth

    You are my color, my light
    my warmth that allows me
    to live and to continue forth
    even through the struggles
    that push limits of the heart

    Life is complete with you
    with strength and care
    that can take an icy heart
    and make it melt to bring
    forth the love it's held.




    Submitted on 2007-02-19 21:02:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i have to comment you so i can get my comment box back haha
    sry! i hope this works
    | Posted on 2008-03-28 00:00:00 | by xieno | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great piece, so heart felt and beautiful. ANyone would be lucky t o have such a poem wrote for them. You are an amazing writer. Again, you have a verry strong last stanza in this one, excpesialy (sp?) the last two lines of it. Amazing piece, keep writing.


    Sarah
    | Posted on 2007-06-25 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]
      man i need to be your boy friend hehe

    and let me get your AIM
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by TwistedMinded | [ Reply to This ]


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