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    dots Submission Name: Writer's Blockdots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 230/384/131
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Yup. Writer's block, with a little love/friendship thrown in at the end for flavah.


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    dotsWriter's Blockdots
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    There are days when nothing
    Seems to wo rk.
    All my p o ems are
    Dis join
    ted. My similes lack
    ‘like’
    Or ‘as’
    And my met aphores
    Are wagon wheels.
    There are days when wor
    ds won’t fa
    ll into place
    And I want to up.
    give
    But then, I think of you
    And try again.




    Submitted on 2007-02-19 23:10:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have read many a writers block poem and i have to say this is the first time i have ever read one disjointed like this.
    You acually gave the feel of ones mind feelng the falling off by dropping your words like this.I felt the disjointed feeling.
    I had to go back pretty far in to your pieces to find this one.So i am asuming that writers block has left you.
    We all have time where we suffer from the writer blocks doom and it sucks.
    Sometimes there are so many lines going through my head it seems like more than one poem going through my mind.
    You did a good job bringing forth the feel of this piece well done.
    | Posted on 2007-09-05 00:00:00 | by deluka | [ Reply to This ]
      Having just recovered from a rather vicious bout of writer's block (from 24th February until day before yesterday) I do relate to this, but actually I technically DON'T write anything (of substance) during this horrendous diseased period.
    Happy days. I am beginning to like your endings.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      I love what you've done to the topography. It is a good solid poem, most definitely, but the topography undoubtedly makes this piece. It's total genius, and I (having a [censored] of a time with line breaks), would never pull this off, so, many congratulations. I love this, truly.
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by Clarkie | [ Reply to This ]
      I sometimes think these writer's block poems end up being the best little creations. I love the creative structure of this poem! It's sweet. :)
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]
      YAAAAY!! This is the cutest thing ever!! I positively love this, it's so adorable. I love poems on writer's block, they make me happy. It's nice to see you get over the block by writing about it. Too sweet, I love the ending.
    "But then, I think of you
    And try again."
    So incredibly sweet. Thanks for posting, Love this.
    Be at peace,
    ~Azura*
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by EmpathicAya | [ Reply to This ]


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