I always inhabited urban environments like an explorer, an intruder, an alien learning the tricks of surviving and not being noticed. Your poetry therefore hits me as an insight into the true denizens of towns, they live there and are energetically, fully, involved with each other. I don't suppose you get a comment from a rural alien very often! But that's my reaction; and it's because you write so clearly. I pick up on some issues that I never understood before. This is a bit remarkable!
The clarity is worth so much more to your verse than the experiments in structure! However, I guess the one is merely natural, but the other is fun!