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Submission Name:
Bad Bonnaroo Boomers
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Author:
Jbills
ASL Info:
30/m/IL
Elite Ratio:
3.52 - 57/68/29
Words:
35
Class/Type:
Poetry/Longing
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Shortie, but a goodie
Bad Bonnaroo Boomers
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Buried beneath abyss
Feelings aren’t felt;
Just to kiss
Who’s uncomfortable?
Peel my skin back
Feel my soul crack
Exposed;
And no one knows
Neurotransmitters numbing
All this time spent dumbing
Submitted on 2007-02-20 06:13:16
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Nice dark poem, with heavily shadowed lines. Thanks for sharing.
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