I agree with A.C., not many people here tackle political issues. I personally don't, but I enjoy reading about them. I had a feeling this was about Bush, so I clicked it. I wasn't wrong
The metre is thrown here and there but that works to your advantage because you don't humdrum a poem of this nature into the reader. That's good, it makes them focus more on the topic at hand rather than the rhyme.
The sentiment is reciprocated. Keep writing.
Cheers
Azuire
Food for thought.I like it.Not many people on here tackle political issues and I think this is done quite well.I was totally thrown by the title initially,I thought it might have sexual connotations but obviously I was wrong!The metre is a bit random but you include some subtle rhyming and it works.Totally agree with the sentiment also.
Cheers
A.C