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    dots Submission Name: Too Steepdots
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    Author: Jbills
    ASL Info:    30/m/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 57/68/29
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsToo Steepdots
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    Maybe we should stop
    The climb is too steep

    Quit and become harvest crop
    Sometimes your strength is all for not
    Losing. Fateís way of choosing

    Maybe we should stop
    The climb is too steep

    We sell morals so cheap
    Lying shameless atop the heap
    Filler. The ultimate killer

    Maybe we should stop
    The climb is too steep

    If we canít reach the top
    Un-open pupils remain asleep
    Shriek when you see how bleak




    Submitted on 2007-02-20 06:17:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      THis shows the emotions of standing up for what you believe in, however I think it could be made much more powerful by becoming more detailed and adding to it's content.
    | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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