I enjoyed reading this, but I don't really think it made a significant impact on me enough to favourite it. I can see why you like it, I would too if I were you.
We saw deeper than ever
Without digging an inch
Stand outside yourself
It takes just one pinch
I think that's well written. Why can't we have more of those simple-yet-so-outstanding stanzas?
Cheers
Azuire
i can see why you like it. it kinda spins. its this whirlwind of color and good times and stuff. "2gether, 2day"? usually i hate shortcuts like that, but this time it really fit. reminds me of sitting on the grass with the one you love next to you.