Very good Jazmine. I think everyone has had a time like this. Maybe not the maiden part, if you're a male, lol, but yes I think a lot of people can relate to this. I like the last lines of this poem, it really puts the saying, "time heals all wounds" into perspective. Very good poem.
god i love this! this is seriously the best poem i've read today...out of the two...but i'll read more and it will still be the best out of the poems i've read today!! you'll be one of the few people on this site who's poetry i read more than one of.
brilliant!! smashing!! wicked!!! doesnt everyone know how it is to be that maiden under the damn willow? to feel utterly alone and unloved? doesnt everyone know what it's like to stumble upon the maiden? to be accused of not understanding? and then realizing that solitude is the cure?
"and I left her to her sorrow
to cry today
and heal tomorrow"
my favorite lines. keep it loverly.