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    dots Submission Name: little weeddots
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    Author: Judy
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 579/569/93
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotslittle weeddots
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    little weed
    cruelty of fate
    you were meant to be a flower
    somewhere somehow
    destiny arrived late
    weed you'll be
    till plucked and thrown
    once again wait

    for now, little weed, wait...




    Submitted on 2007-02-20 09:41:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You know sometimes weeds are just important as flowers. Somtimes even more so because they offer medicine and food for animals just to think of a couple reasons but there are many more uses for weeds as well.

    Ennjoyed the read,

    !doc'
    | Posted on 2007-04-13 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ]
      man im going to be honest. i was pumped to read about some Weed. but alas i was disapointed. but id definitly smoke that little weed for ya. keep it up .
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by lark | [ Reply to This ]
      to enhance this piece I would suggest inserting punctuation and capitalization of letters. The idea is alright, but I sence a more powerful meaning than what you expressed in your poem. it has much potential to be great.

    ~orange
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]



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