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    dots Submission Name: I Dream Of Youdots
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    Author: Pabapfc
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 111/107/66
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Dream Of Youdots
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    Looking at the small gift you gave me,
    While we knew each other,
    A small gift,
    With so much meaning,
    A small dress,
    My favorite dress.

    I put it back in the box,
    I kiss it goodnight,
    But who I’m really kissing,
    Is you.

    I miss you,
    You’re no longer with me,
    You’re far away,
    Far from me,
    Far from my love,
    You are my love.

    As I sleep,
    I dream of you,
    What I dream,
    Is for me to know,
    For me to realize,
    That’ll it will never happen.

    I dream of you,
    Running to you,
    Being in your arms,
    Seeing the love in your eyes,
    That I saw before,
    Before I left you,
    Before you knew,
    Before us.

    I love you,
    I miss you,
    I want you back,
    I need you back.




    Submitted on 2007-02-20 10:09:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ahh, a woman's love is strong. very deep. i can feel your longing for this man. keep your chin up...if he knows what's good for him, he'll come back. if not, he wasn't worth the wait anyway.
    good poem.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-05-29 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      Eh. It was ok. You could improve upon it. The flow is off a tad and the words seem a little lacking in some areas. I do however like the rhythm and the feeling behind it.


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    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by BestxDeceptions | [ Reply to This ]



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