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    dots Submission Name: A place for you to staydots
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    Author: insphered soul
    ASL Info:    18/M/ Hmmm?
    Elite Ratio:    6.56 - 450/375/90
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 268
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 345



    Description:
       Hmmm........cheese.


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    dotsA place for you to staydots
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    I stare up
    at the lilac sky
    thinking of you
    and wanting to die

    Sometimes at night
    when I try to sleep
    I see your face
    and start to weep

    I can't control my feelings
    when I see you everyday
    but always in my heart
    there's a place for you to stay




    Submitted on 2007-02-20 10:14:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wont*
    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      *wonders why this wong go away from my list*
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      *comments so i can have 100% so i can PM you*
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      awww. that's so sweet. who ever this is for is really lucky. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

    <3 Julia
    | Posted on 2007-02-25 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
      um...no, you emo freak. i love you more than...well everything (times infinity to the CHEESE jello power plus two).....OMG!! I MISS YOU SO MUDH!!! YOU DONT UNDERSTANDETH!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      heart~felt and touching...

    but      hmmm...cheese      ???

    any hooo

    i can tell there is a true undertone of longing here but it is some what weak...like you weren't really giving us the full picture. Keeping a bit of the story for your own broken heart???

    you do have a beautiful longing tone which is my favorite to read or write for that matter.
    i do think this one could use a little more umff though.

    mmmmcheesemmmm
    yummy
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]



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