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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    gentle are the sweetly caressing waves
    low and lovely, to wondering eyes they do please
    patterns of salt scattered along the shore
    giving sweet reason to coat thick paint on riveted canvas

    I did desire to pick up a heavy brush
    of black blue and crimson red
    just smear it on
    so it would be
    harsh





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