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What happens when you're in love

Author: sweetme16
ASL Info:    21/f/who cares
Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108 /252 /162
Words: 117
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Average Vote:    4.0000
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What happens when you're in love

Do you know what happens when you’re in love
Your heart starts pounding every time you see them
You feel butterflies in your stomach
Your body becomes like jelly every time they kiss you
When they do kiss you
You never want them to stop
You can feel there presence
Across the room or with your eyes closed
every time they go out of your sight
You can’t wait till you can see them again
Everyone minute without them
Seems like hours
every time you see them
You never want to let them go
That’s how you know that you're in love

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