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    dots Submission Name: Loves Downfallsdots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       This is to everyone that thinks love is a game... it's really not and yall all need to grow up and mature some!


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    dotsLoves Downfallsdots
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    Actin like love is a game
    That no one gets hurt
    Everything's okay
    In every kind of way
    When it's really not
    Nothing's ever the same
    Once you've been played
    People say everyone goes through it
    When there's really no reason for it
    All it shows is immaturity
    Only that you're too young for a relationship
    Those three words use to be said
    Only a time or two
    Whenever people actually meant it
    Now it's not enough
    You have to do more
    To even half-way convience people
    That you mean it
    And it's true
    So I vote that we just not say
    Those three words
    For any kind of reason
    Cause all that ever happens
    Is people get hurt.




    Submitted on 2007-02-20 14:32:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I totally agree. People say that hate is a strong word, but love is just as strong, and yet people toss it around as if it has no meaning.
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by T. Garrett | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, I agreeee. The words I Love You are tossed around far too often and most of the it ends in pain.....
    Good write. Keep Writing! <3

    ~FarFromSanityy~
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by FarFromSanityy | [ Reply to This ]


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