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    dots Submission Name: Fuck Off And Grow Up Somedots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 699
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       to melody may johnson... take that bitch!!!


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    dotsFuck Off And Grow Up Somedots
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    Fuck you and your immaturity
    You're just jelous
    Cause you can't get a baby like me
    Mad cause no one
    Will give you a second chance
    You waste guys
    Like you spend money
    Abusing and using
    Until there's nothing left
    You're too conceded
    To consider anyone else
    You always trail this one guy
    That happens to be sexy and fine
    But guess what bitch
    He's mine
    So whu don't you just fuck off
    And grow up some
    Cause right now you're actin like a whore
    Standin on a street corner
    I'm tired of this shit
    I thought we were friends
    Oh yea,
    We was
    Till you found out he didn't want you
    So quit bein immature
    He's mine not yours
    So fuck off and grow up some
    Cause right now you're actin like a whore
    Standin on a street corner.




    Submitted on 2007-02-20 14:52:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Pretty cool. You seem really angry at this girl. I wouldn't wanna mess with you when you're mad. :) Good write.
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
      This reminds me of one of my ex's. Very inspiring. I like.
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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