Description: White plastic knife. The light was directly overhead, and reflecting off of the plastic. This was a fun one. Hope you like it.
Be at peace,
S.E. (See) White Lie -------------------------------------------
White, projecting a false
sense of security, to
away from you small, pointy
teeth. You gleam, almost
menacingly, in a forbidden
that attracts the innocent
to your curved handle, fitting
appropriately in the hands of the
meduim, who carries out your
This one is brilliant, especially since you tell us your inspiration. So why not make that idea into the title. Because I think if you don't have the notes, we'll miss the creative thread and that to me is the
I would name it "Ode to a Plastic Knife". Say lady, do you have any spork poems to offer us poor souls? Tell me more!
I always enjoy your poetry, and I'm very amused by your inspiration in this piece. Very nice. It's so amazing to me the things that can spark inspiration. If I weren't a writer, I think I would surely explode from all the thoughts that the world inspires with the simplest of things. :)
This was a lovely write, very enjoyable. The only thing I noticed was you dropped an 'r' in your fourth line on the word "your" but you have "you" insetead. Otherwise, wonderful as always :)