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    dots Submission Name: Waiting Togetherdots
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    Author: just an angel
    ASL Info:    17/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 95/109/59
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 792
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    Description:
       It's a simple poem I wrote and thought was cute, I put it as my away message for AIM.


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    dotsWaiting Togetherdots
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    Good things will come
    Good things will appear
    We just have to wait
    A day, a month, a year

    Until that time
    Until that grateful hour
    We'll watch clouds fly
    and blooms of flowers

    I'll sit here with you
    I'll sit here evermore
    My friend, I won't leave
    Sorry if I'm a bore

    We may be here long
    We may be here for a while
    So pull up a chair
    And put on a smile





    Submitted on 2007-02-20 17:15:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well you werent kidding about simple....
    i like the posotive, even if its not my style....
    this friend that you speak of, must be a helluva friend to stay soooo long no matter how boring, as you say, you are.
    but nonetheless, you wait side by side.

    oh and one small question....whats AIM?
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
      i love friends, true friends are always there even when you think they arent

    this is like the kind of friend you have had from kindergarten throughout your entire life

    and they always make you feel great

    this was very sweet for whoever you wrote it for or about, they must be one kick ass person
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      This is sweet
    To me in this write you are letting your Friends know you have an honest Loving Heart and will be there for them no matter what
    I for one respect that because this is the same way I am and to be Honest there is truthfully very few like this
    Excellent Job!!!
    I really liked the honesty of this write
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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