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    dots Submission Name: Rebirth of a Body Brokendots
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    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsRebirth of a Body Brokendots
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    Oh lord what to do with this body thats broken.....

    If only I could feed myself
    dress myself
    bathe myself
    Look in the mirror and like myself
    But I see the same as the people unspoken
    the tattered remains of a body thats broken

    Sand snaps under wheels
    as the dim lantern dances and steals embarressed glances of my unwanted tango
    metal chariots glide like the sun
    On the long wooden tounge
    Of the ocean that roars down below me.

    The pull of the moon like a puppets lagoon
    Force the waves to crest like iced fire
    Come burn in the depths of the waiting caress
    Of the rebirth the ocean admires
    Electric movement I plunged and reached for the one who sat on this pier before me


    I took a deep breath and sank to the death
    of an unwanted body thats broken
    With my last breath
    my body went limp,
    The lord has finally spoken








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