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    dots Submission Name: Teenage Angstdots
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    Author: Jbills
    ASL Info:    30/m/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 57/68/29
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 919
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 442



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    dotsTeenage Angstdots
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    Damn we were wild
    Rode dynos for miles
    When chromies were in style

    Damn we were wild
    Prank numbers were dialed
    Laugh till your ass was on tile

    Damn we were wild
    Thrill was enough
    Punishment was mild
    Stay in touch
    With your inner-child

    Damn we were wild
    Charges have been filed
    Responsibilitiesí mountain has been piled




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      The poem is quite active and with a definite forward motion. It appears that the angst has externalised itself quite eloquently both in word and deed! Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-01-25 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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