I like it. A new take on love. I especially the first stanza. It really grabbed my attention and I loved how you described it as being cut off at every angle. That it is so impossible to love her, even though you must, and you continue to pursue it. Its nice, and a sweet notion. Good write. And I am sorry I havent been able to give you any advice in my comments, lol. They are just so good! haha.