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Author: thewantedwords
ASL Info:    28 male sydney
Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 40 /40 /37
Words: 67
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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obsticles and hurdles leaps and jumps,
running fluids as my heart it pumps,
lost lands and places in time,
loss of rememberence a hard place to find,
torment and fear pleasure and pain,
feelings of remorse and nothing to gain,
a listing sound a enormise beat,
its the pied piper playing my street,
its a disease the sun is solar,
dosent match the feeling known as bipolar.

Submitted on 2007-02-21 03:45:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  it's interesting . not your most original piece but still... it's got nice flwo and forms
| Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]

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