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    dots Submission Name: My Secretdots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 823
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    Description:
       This is a poem I wrote about another guy I like. Yes, I like many guys but I don't flirt with them if I have a boyfriend. Well I just don't know what to do really. I wrote this hoping I would give it to him but I'm still too afraid. One, because I have a boyfriend & that's wrong to do that & two, because I'm afraid of what he'll say.


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    dotsMy Secretdots
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    I have a secret to tell you.
    I don't know if I should though.
    It's about you
    & it could spread like a virus
    If you speak it.
    You could
    Embrace it or laugh at it,
    Love it or hate it.
    I'm afraid that you'll reject me,
    That I'll never see you again.
    I shouldn't want to see your face,
    But I do.
    I shouldn't want to feel your touch,
    But I do.
    I constantly think of you
    & wish to be with you.
    When I'm always about to tell you
    The words choke in my throat
    & my heart races.
    Since no words will say
    What I want to,
    I wrote it in a poem,
    Just to tell you
    My secret is,
    I love you.




    Submitted on 2007-02-21 09:30:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well is it a letter?
    i think it is !!
    i guess you have to send this letter to whom it belongs. lol
    well i am sorry but i do not find any poetry here it is just so simple , you are just talking , do not take it seriously , but that is my point of view try to improve your writing, writing some symbolic sentences or anything like that please
    well my advice for your problem is that tell him and tell your boyfriend what is happening with you , otherwise you could lose 2 persons instead of only 1, i am telling you that becuase i have lost 2 important persons in mylife becuase of the almost same reason...
    well thanks for sharing and i hope you have time to read my stuff i would really appreciate it
    take care
    and have a nice day
    peace and love
    Victor
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      eh. you're right. a) you have a boyfriend. b) theres no way to know what he thinks without asking. i have two different friends, each going through one half of your predicament. one friend is a pathological flirt. single, attached, no guy is safe. the other friend is pining for a guy and trying to figure out if he feels the same way. if you're looking for advice, here's some for you: figure out first if you really want to let go of your current boyfriend. make sure you do that before you make a move (if any) on guy #2. and then adjust as the situation requires. but you dont have to listen to me. no one else does.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]


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