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    dots Submission Name: Cage of Cacoethesdots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 563
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    dotsCage of Cacoethesdots
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    Dark hollow words seep out
    Eyes look through an impentrable darkeness
    Soft demanding bodies collide
    Hands are grasping for a hold on drenched skin
    Lips...hips...tits...
    The hard scent of lust leaks into the night
    A moan is released from the cage of her cacoethes
    Stuck inside and outside world
    Rocking to a beat only they can feel
    Cocks...Rocks...Moonlit walks
    Shocks of obsession pulse through twilight
    Screaming for a release that neither are ready for
    Moving with an internal music
    Reaching for a consummation that neither
    will feel...does this make her a whore?
    Dreams...Screams...Fiends
    Hold your breath, you can't get enough
    Feel his dick, rubbing your clit
    Flashes of light throb through the darkness
    Thrusting for unknown desires, begging the gods for a purpose
    Forgive...Live...It's all a fib
    Peirce this torture with one final thrust
    Share one look, one time, it's only once
    Don't forget, he isn't yours
    It's only once, just one mistake
    Throb...Sob...God




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