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    dots Submission Name: Defineddots
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    Author: Lyrikz
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Ash Fork
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 4/8/10
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 574
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1300



    Description:
       This was written originally for a challenge on "The Definition of Character"


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    dotsDefineddots
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    A mystery
    A puzzle
    Something with a lock
    No key
    No combo
    Leaving you for lost
    Thats me
    Complex
    Mildy unkind
    So cursed
    So blessed
    Yet to be defined

    A threat
    A thrill
    Someone just so cold
    To kiss
    To kill
    Teasing oh so bold
    Thats you
    Somewhat
    But more to be outlined
    Your taste
    Your touch
    You've yet to be defined

    So sweet
    naive
    Tenderly she trusts
    Trusts you
    Trusts me
    Simply she trusts us
    Thats her
    She's there
    She's gone and left to find
    She loves
    She swears
    She's yet to be defined

    We three
    Us too
    A tangled web of sin
    It seems
    We loose
    Us nor her will win
    Our stories
    Our hell
    Our very hearts entwined
    We're human
    We fail
    We've yet to be defined

    They pass
    They judge
    They think they understand
    But I
    Won't budge
    Who has the upper hand
    Not us
    Not them
    But our God divine
    Our World
    All sin
    Yet to be defined




    Submitted on 2007-02-21 15:29:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Absolutely loved it, I like the rhythm!
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]


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