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Staring at these blank pages Trying in vain to free these troubled thoughts With heartfelt words unspoken These devious machinations Of my wanton mind My inner demons Imbibing in my corruption My chained and hidden emotions Building up to break the dams of my impenetrable reserve My silent heart Waiting to destroy my stone façade The days come harder Every moment of solitude Unbearable In my longing for you My ever present desire for your love It’s eating away at the last remaining pieces of my heart Taking from me All that I have left What is left here without you? A cold and empty shell of a girl Murdered by your love. |
well one thing is for sure, this has given us both a creative spark, no matter how depressing it is.... the last part is really strong, as is the whole poem, but the ending primarily. Guermo | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by Guermo | [ Reply to This ] | Oh wow...this was extremely powerful and it got me thinking about stuff I try NOT to think about..but..wow...heartbreak...I think you captured it so well here. I think when we lose someone there are SO many feelings in our heart and in our minds...it really does seem like a dam could break at any moment. We're so used to having somone there so every second that passes truly is unbearable...and the company of others doesn't reall help...because there's only one person that can make it better....and they're not there anymore. The longing is neverending...and utterly debilitating...I guess the part that hit the hardest for me was the last part...the fact that without her love..all that's left is a cold and empty shell of a girl...murdered by love. It's so sad...but it's so true of a broken heart. Great write. I loved it. ~hailie~ | | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ] | |