I wont die i wont go away i am like a fly buzzing and buzzing until you get mad at me and try to smash me. Dont leave i am crying out for you please hear me. I know now that you wont and your going on where you go i will follow. Lets not talk again and waste our days in the dark and listen to the beating of our ever sadden hearts. We are just teenagers and cant help ourselfs. it feels so good when you start out but leads to only pain...do you really want me dead so bad that you would kill your self? Just to get away from me and before you left you cried out to me "i dont love you" you broke my heart so now it is time for me to break yours. But the funny thing is i dont want to. The desert air is makeing me choke and i am triping in your foot steps i know that nobody wants me around i have ecepted that for all i know i wont love you back. Crawling in the mud reaching for my hand i see you drowning in your own hate go fly away and never come back i wont bother you anymore
I like it, don't get me wrong, but are you bipolar? In this poem you seem to switch back and forth with the way you are feeling like tug-o-war. I can relate. Very good.
Other than that. It sounds like you are feeling
sorry for yourself. I mean It's kinda harsh what that person is doing, but still. I really liked it though ^_^
Submission Name: Revenge
